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Critique: The Black Shepherd

LorenSauber

New Member
Hello all.

I have finally gotten around to posting the first chapter of a story I had intended to post many months ago--little setbacks and the never-ending urge to proofread and pick things apart. From this point I hope to post chapters on a weekly basis.

Here it is (in PDF).

Any feedback is welcome, although I would be most grateful to those who find and let me know of blatant typos, misspellings and similar grammatical errors. Note that I've knowingly sacrificed the grammar rules here and there.

Cheers.
 
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