Punji
Vaskebjørn
I'd like some constructive criticism on this short piece I've written. Honestly is appreciated of course. 
As per the title of the thread, the title of my story is "The Good Doctor." It's suitable for general audiences.
The basis of the plot: A brilliant and odd but good-natured figure and his mysterious works and bizarre methods capture the interest of a small town who believe him to be insane. Unbeknownst to anyone initially, the doctor is entirely rational despite his strange behaviours.
I welcome any kind of critique, but I'm mostly concerned if it is interesting. Would you want to read more?
I'm not sure how much I'll continue to write if anything, nor can I say how long I want the story to be. Right now I've labeled it "chapter 1" on the submission page, but I can't say for certain how that may change.
The work can be found here: www.furaffinity.net: The Good Doctor -- Chapter 1 by Punji. Thanks for reading!
As per the title of the thread, the title of my story is "The Good Doctor." It's suitable for general audiences.
The basis of the plot: A brilliant and odd but good-natured figure and his mysterious works and bizarre methods capture the interest of a small town who believe him to be insane. Unbeknownst to anyone initially, the doctor is entirely rational despite his strange behaviours.
I welcome any kind of critique, but I'm mostly concerned if it is interesting. Would you want to read more?
I'm not sure how much I'll continue to write if anything, nor can I say how long I want the story to be. Right now I've labeled it "chapter 1" on the submission page, but I can't say for certain how that may change.
The work can be found here: www.furaffinity.net: The Good Doctor -- Chapter 1 by Punji. Thanks for reading!