I'm in Liverpool, it's too bloody hotBelieve me, I cant do a damn thing with numbers, at all. It's just alien to me.
I do wish the British weather would make up it's damn mind. First it was humid, now it's cloudy... Damn the summer time.
XD My motherboard glows, which I find a pain mostly when I want to sleep, sometimes my system will get stuck when shutting down.
I love how Windows doesn't know what caused a hang with Explorer.EXE lmao.
Does this make any sense, or am I guessing that I was right, about my system crashing when GeForce was updating:
"The computer has rebooted from a bugcheck. The bugcheck was: 0x0000003b (0x00000000c0000005, 0xfffff8024ccb4e80, 0xffff8c08eedfd740, 0x0000000000000000). A dump was saved in: C:\WINDOWS\MEMORY.DMP. Report Id: 00000000-0000-0000-0000-000000000000."
In other words, it was a grease fucking lightning quick BSOD I didn't see.
I’m super apprehensive about staying in the fandom. FurAffinity isn’t the right site for me and neither are DeviantArt and SoFurry.
I don’t know what to do. I feel lonely and have practically nobody to talk to within the furry fandom, while others seemed so much more welcoming for me.
After I finish my current commissions, I don’t see any point in posting my stories on furry websites anymore.
Thank you. It’s much appreciated. Don’t worry about the anxiety part haha, I’m 100% okay with criticism and that kind of thing. Not everyone’s going to have the same experience or feel the same way reading a story and that’s the beauty of writing.Well
If you want some blunt criticism, read on.
If not, then pretend this never happened and enjoy your day. XD
Your page doesn't present much, as in, there isn't a lot to view or read. You literally only have one small page of submissions, which consist of mixed mediums. Some made by you, some not. After a whole year of being active on the site, it's not a whole lot. I don't think you've put out enough to have viewers even get a feel for you or your style.
Most of your story submissions are commissions, which probably means it's geared towards what the commissioner wants. I've peeked at your site where you have the first chapter posted, but that's all there is. It almost feels like we're expected to know more about you, without you actually taking the time to explain or describe it to us.
People don't like to make the extra click. I'm not saying get rid of the site to your link, but definitely make sure to upload all/any of your later installments.
One common thing I've noticed in your writing is that there's very little description on the characters involved. A lot of telling instead of showing. From what I'm getting in the first dozen lines of every character introduced is almost all thought or dialogue with very little indication on what we're actually supposed to be seeing. Every line is pretty much a thought, and almost every thought is a line. I personally find 1'st and present tense to be unlikeable because most people just decide everything and expect you to know exactly what to imagine, or the scenario is something that conflicts with you, and immediately ruins the immersion.
I'm not saying you shouldn't quit FA, but I feel like even just keeping the extra platform to dump it on and hope for comments isn't a terrible idea. I do that with deviantart all the time. XD
Sorry if this gives you anxiety.
Oh god. Glad I finally bought a damn fan. I can't stand the heat.I'm trying, haha. The heat just sucks.