Wanted Critique on music

[-SL-]

Hi, I make techno (much of all: Drum and bass, House, Trance, Happy Hardcore, ect...) I was wondering if anyone could give me feedback, tips, or comments on my music :3.
Thank you

-Dj SLum

Artist Page
www.myspace.com/djslumclub

Furaffinity Page
www.furaffinity.net/user/-sl-/

or my gallery
www.furaffinity.net/gallery/-sl-/

 

[-SL-]

erro? anyone?

 

[YouJustLostTheGame]

I went in your gallery and listened to "Sifting Through Time." Great song. I'm no musical professional, so I can't really give any critique, but you've got a great sound going there