I was going to suggest the same thing. It look me a long time to figure out what the picture was of - mostly because of the snow. And as Raever said, it's not bad - it's pretty good, you captured your goal, it's just getting it to the next step. I have a small number of tweaks I'd suggest looking at.I think that its alright. It's a bit hard to look at for me, not because it's bad - there's just a lot going on, and there doesn't seem to be a "focus" in the piece. My eyes are drawn everywhere due to all the "noise" (snow, fire, spider colors, spider eyes, human clothing, shadows, airbrush, etc). The actual color coordination is good, just needs balance.