Cain
Guess what mood I'm in today.
Re: What is with all of this "My little pony" stuff? (The unofficial official MLP Thr
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I can write really mushy if I want.
Anyways, thanks for the input, I missed that error you spotted, and I will take the course of action you suggested (somewhere around there anyways). I really appreciate the kind words, and the feedback you've given *insert pinkie smile*. Um, if it's not too much of a hassle, would you be willing to proofread any future chapters I manage to churn out? Um, only if you want to.
Also, the prologue isn't really a good indication of what will happen throughout the story. I'd like to say the reader will be left feeling a cocktail of emotions, but I'll just have to see what the story will pan out to be.
Thanks again!
Your enthusiasm and compliments light the kindling under my heart. <3The short musings and thoughts in the story were shared up until then, but I wouldn't keep the pattern of the musing between the two completely uniform.
AJ is already on the same thought track as RD at this point, since we left off with her beating herself up for not taking her chance. I would assume that if you had AJ complete that thought she would try and justify why she didn't do it, considering whether or not RD was a fillyfooler the same way RD was unsure of AJ.
So! It'd be odd to not finish AJ's train of thought. I'd go with the musing, just try and differ their thoughts later, even though it's kinda adorable when they're so similar to each other's.
Noticed that AJ said "One can never have too much apples!" also. Should be "too many". Think there was another error somewhere but I'd have to re-read it.
I really enjoyed reading it though! Don't stop![]()
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I can write really mushy if I want.
Anyways, thanks for the input, I missed that error you spotted, and I will take the course of action you suggested (somewhere around there anyways). I really appreciate the kind words, and the feedback you've given *insert pinkie smile*. Um, if it's not too much of a hassle, would you be willing to proofread any future chapters I manage to churn out? Um, only if you want to.
Also, the prologue isn't really a good indication of what will happen throughout the story. I'd like to say the reader will be left feeling a cocktail of emotions, but I'll just have to see what the story will pan out to be.
Thanks again!
