what u think of this yiff?

[Kaluna]

i drew my best pictur ever
i will start taking porn commissions now, i really feel ready

what do you guys think of this?
still need to color and shade it

http://d.facdn.net/art/zomiee/1372468376.zomiee_hotyiff.jpg (NSFW!)

 

[Falaffel]

Wah.. what?

 

[Kaluna]

Wah.. what?

Thats not critique, plz stay on topic kthx

 

[Ansitru]

Will you be offering package-deals with eyebleach?
Satirical thread, so no serious answer from me. Deal with it.

 

[Kaluna]

UHM PLZ GUISE STAY ON TOPIC
if you cant offer critique dont say anything
i cant stand when peoples derail my thread

 

[Grimfang999]

57/a4paper would dance again

 

[Kaluna]

57/a4paper would dance again

i dont understand what you mean, could you please use words better?

 

[Falaffel]

The lines are too squiggly.

The expressions are all wrong.

The colours are so bland.

 

[Zydala]

Party is over, time to go home!

(in all seriousness though, please refrain from satirical threads! Thank youuu)