Writing Dropbox Up For Critique

[lucarionme]

Here's the link to my literature dropbox. Some things are unfinished, and the Babblings section, as I am well aware, makes no sense whatsoever, but I'd appreciate ya'll scanning through and finding any little habits of mine that could be broken. I think my biggest problem may be pacing, but I'll let ya'll look and see for yourselves!


https://www.dropbox.com/sh/seqhg67b3t8hkv5/AAC3jTZgyCOs6sos6u3oCFOQa?dl=0

 

[SkyeLansing]

You are going to get much more of a response if you post link your stuff to a particular post on FA then simply throwing a link up to a mess of unrelated files. You'll probably notice the critique board gets very little action, so it is important to make it as easy for the reviewer as possible to critique your stuff by giving a specific goal and not overwhelming them with requests.

That in mind I suggest you select the piece you most want critique for and post it on FA (as a scrap if you like) and solicit input for that.