Are you fucking serious? No. Just no. Rassah cared a hell of a lot about Red, going as far as covering medical expenses for her teeth. I can guarantee that he does care about doing right by her. If I were you I'd apologize right now
What's wrong with what Rassah wrote anyway? I read it and didn't see anything wrong with it. If you think you can do better that's fine, just don't be a dick about it man, come on that's really unnecessary. And inappropriate: in such a context you should stick together. The more minds the better chance to write something very nice, no?
For the record, I tried reaching out to Rassah to give some input and he flat out ignored me. So that's just one reason I think he wants this to be more his article than Red's article. The other, more important reason is because I think the main point he wants to drive home actually contradicts a lot of the truths revealed in the same narrative. I never said he didn't care about Red, bear in mind. I just think he cares about this more, and that his personal motives blind him. That seems to matter more than painting her in the best, most sympathetic but still realistic light.
If you want an alternate take, you're going to get one. Trust me.