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Earlier this year, I got inspired and wanted to practice some writing, and ended up writing a 3 page short story thing, more like an excerpt of a scene from something larger. I started to edit that first draft for the next few days, but it started to feel like I wasn't really making any progress. Felt like I was replacing clunky sentences with other clunky sentences, having trouble just coming up with any good sentences. Thought I'd post it anyways just for some advice and opinions.

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Copy of Pickaxe (4) (2)

Pickaxe The man sat on the floor of an abandoned kitchen, back up against a row of shelves, canteen next to him, hand on his chest, trying to catch his breath as if he had run across the entire desert. His brain pulsated from a searing headache, feeling like it was pushing against the inside of...
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