Critique: Your honest opinion ,when you see my art. critique = YES!

[nineret]

here is a 6 art (1 was for fanart for chrono cross) and 2 of them I draw today. I draw not too long ago 1 month for short peroid of time. as you can see it completely different art style.
I mean, its all drawed by me.

YES! and it's all draw by mouse.

What do you think?

here is explain of each picture.
first picture. my old art style (i used today) (i draw today)
second picture. testing new art-style. (i draw today)
third picture. fanart for chrono cross. pip! ^w^
fourth picture. got inspire to draw this
fifth picture. just draw for background in my website (its gone dump now)
sixth picture. lazy drawing picture that finish in 5 minute (used my ancient art-style)

 

[reptile logic]

Based on similar work that I have seen, there is nothing wrong with it.

Neither the style nor the content appeals to me, personally, so naturally the value of my input is limited.

 

[Inferndragon]

Ditch the mouse and get a drawing tablet.
If not. Start using line tools in your programs to draw the oulines of things.

1. Picture 1 - reminds me of MS paint drawings unfortunately the line work probably needs to be refined or done at a higher resolution so you can make the most of lines. The eyes feel a little too big as it doesn't fit on the face completely.
2. Picture 2 - The eye with the X slightly goes off the face too. Which unfortunately doesn't look right for some odd reason.
3. Picture 3 - Line Work is pretty good. Unfortunately. You got lazy with the colouring and shading which needs more work.
4. Picture 4 - Really cute reminds me of that beat boxing meme thing.
5. PIcture 5 - Eyes proportions are good. Can't say much more than that.
6. Picture 6 - Ehhh... Not my cup of tea.

 

[jxne]

If you want to keep using a mouse I have an old version of SAI that has a nice line tool which helps a lot if you're using mouse, which I used myself when i was still drawing with a mouse. I can also send you a quick tutorial on how to use it, if you're interested just just pm me.

 

[nineret]

Thanks for critique my drawing, just wanted to say. Dragonnite-KKL inspire me to draw art. which his old art-style no longer exist. since 2013.
To be honest. I really like his art-style 2010-2012. its it because I doesn't improve my art since 2021. I rather focus on another thing.

However, it's were to too hard to have art-style like him, I decide to drawing art that more likely from 2010. mostly are drawn from mouse.
I decide to draw art that likely made on MS paint as easier way to draw. demi-human animal being/warrior cat.

picture below that inspire me to draw.

 

[Faustus]

I think the most important thing to say here is that the art shows definite progression. If I was going to guess, I'd say the one on the right was the oldest, leading up to the ones on the left being the most recent, and your grasp of perspective, lighting, anatomy and stylisation do seem to have improved over that time.

Personally, the MS Paint style of drawing kinda puts me off. It's got a really bad case of the jaggies because there's no line antialiasing, and that really stands out.

I'm not a huge fan of this particular style of art myself, though, so I can't really say how good or bad it is beyond this.

 

[folvaen]

i like this style of art. since its simplified, and stylised, it wont be too hard to learn how to animate if you ever wanted to get into that.
I think its fine for the eyes to leave the face, its a choice.

seeing ur drawing from 2010-2012 stylistic influences id say try experiment with changing the size of your brush. thick outlines, vs thin lines on the inside... or thicker lines for overlap.. you can also use the eraser to fake pen pressure too, and sculpt your lines.
It'd also help to look for other artists you like and seeing what you can learn from them!

 

[Amepix Will Win]

It's cuuuuuuuuuuuute!

I'm not much of a judge when it comes to these things, but do know it think it's cute

 

[Vinfang]

If you're stuck with mouse drawing, consider using paint tool Sai. It allows you to create line weight by adjusting the vectors.

On the matter of line weights, use thinner lines for smaller details/ bg/ where the light source hits hardess, apply thicker lines to body parts closer to viewer to imply depth, for example the hands in 1,2,5.

Take more time and patience with lining. It's essential to create good work.